Hello, good job in bringing out the mood, the face is really well rendered and I like the grainy texture you added!
I think few things you can improve is:
- The lighting on the body can be better, I noticed you didn't look for photo reference for the body in this kind of lighting. It is important to look for reference for the parts that you're not sure, observe and apply it into your drawing, this is a good way to study and practice.
- The lower part of her dress is too dark. The light source is not far away from her, so the dress will have some lighting on it as well.
- This is just a minor feedback, the floating dust around the light can be more randomized, so it will look more natural.
Overall really great job, well done on your final project! I hope you enjoyed the process and learned a lot, thank you for joining my course! :)
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It is shocking to see the evolution of drawing. From the sketch to the final setting, it turned out very good!
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@aka_flor Thank you very much for rating it! <3
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Professeur PlusHello, good job in bringing out the mood, the face is really well rendered and I like the grainy texture you added!
I think few things you can improve is:
- The lighting on the body can be better, I noticed you didn't look for photo reference for the body in this kind of lighting. It is important to look for reference for the parts that you're not sure, observe and apply it into your drawing, this is a good way to study and practice.
- The lower part of her dress is too dark. The light source is not far away from her, so the dress will have some lighting on it as well.
- This is just a minor feedback, the floating dust around the light can be more randomized, so it will look more natural.
Overall really great job, well done on your final project! I hope you enjoyed the process and learned a lot, thank you for joining my course! :)
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@bearbrickjia Hello,
I will keep that in mind for future illustrations, thank you very much for the feedback!! :D
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@aka_flor Incredible I loved your style.
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@anarrazola13 I'm very happy, thank you: DDD
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