I like it, it's entertaining and it left me wanting more. The thing about the spelling mistakes is true but the text is understood. Courage that we are going to get out of this and if you can continue with the story. I love.
I'm so glad you made so much progress! Congratulations on all these ready pages!
I apologize for the delay in answering you, the quarantine caught me in an apartment without internet and I use the neighbor's Wi-Fi which is very unstable.
What you mention about the texts I think you do not have to worry at this stage. There is always time to correct, I think it is not the main thing when the project is starting. I'm glad you tell us that you have more chapters planned, it makes you want to know how that story continues! In my opinion, when a story is just starting and a kind of fizz is generated, the most important thing is to keep going and moving forward. At this stage of the project, the most valuable thing is the impulse to want to continue, I think there is always time for everything else. The pages seemed super fluid. I like that the composition varies, also that the text is more prominent on some pages and others are more stripped down. The story leaves a lot of intrigue, surely something like this happened to all of us. Being young and wanting to leave everything for someone who was not worth it in the end (it happened to me too): P
Makes you want to read more, I hope you keep moving forward!
I'm so glad you made so much progress! Congratulations on all these ready pages!
I apologize for the delay in answering you, the quarantine caught me in an apartment without internet and I use the neighbor's Wi-Fi which is very unstable.
What you mention about the texts I think you do not have to worry at this stage. There is always time to correct, I think it is not the main thing when the project is starting. I'm glad you tell us that you have more chapters planned, it makes you want to know how that story continues! In my opinion, when a story is just starting and a kind of fizz is generated, the most important thing is to keep going and moving forward. At this stage of the project, the most valuable thing is the impulse to want to continue, I think there is always time for everything else. The pages seemed super fluid. I like that the composition varies, also that the text is more prominent on some pages and others are more stripped down. The story leaves a lot of intrigue, surely something like this happened to all of us. Being young and wanting to leave everything for someone who was not worth it in the end (it happened to me too): P
Makes you want to read more, I hope you keep moving forward!
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I like it, it's entertaining and it left me wanting more. The thing about the spelling mistakes is true but the text is understood. Courage that we are going to get out of this and if you can continue with the story. I love.
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Thank you very much 💙💙💙 @tokkaido
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Professeur PlusI'm so glad you made so much progress! Congratulations on all these ready pages!
I apologize for the delay in answering you, the quarantine caught me in an apartment without internet and I use the neighbor's Wi-Fi which is very unstable.
What you mention about the texts I think you do not have to worry at this stage. There is always time to correct, I think it is not the main thing when the project is starting. I'm glad you tell us that you have more chapters planned, it makes you want to know how that story continues! In my opinion, when a story is just starting and a kind of fizz is generated, the most important thing is to keep going and moving forward. At this stage of the project, the most valuable thing is the impulse to want to continue, I think there is always time for everything else. The pages seemed super fluid. I like that the composition varies, also that the text is more prominent on some pages and others are more stripped down. The story leaves a lot of intrigue, surely something like this happened to all of us. Being young and wanting to leave everything for someone who was not worth it in the end (it happened to me too): P
Makes you want to read more, I hope you keep moving forward!
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Professeur PlusI'm so glad you made so much progress! Congratulations on all these ready pages!
I apologize for the delay in answering you, the quarantine caught me in an apartment without internet and I use the neighbor's Wi-Fi which is very unstable.
What you mention about the texts I think you do not have to worry at this stage. There is always time to correct, I think it is not the main thing when the project is starting. I'm glad you tell us that you have more chapters planned, it makes you want to know how that story continues! In my opinion, when a story is just starting and a kind of fizz is generated, the most important thing is to keep going and moving forward. At this stage of the project, the most valuable thing is the impulse to want to continue, I think there is always time for everything else. The pages seemed super fluid. I like that the composition varies, also that the text is more prominent on some pages and others are more stripped down. The story leaves a lot of intrigue, surely something like this happened to all of us. Being young and wanting to leave everything for someone who was not worth it in the end (it happened to me too): P
Makes you want to read more, I hope you keep moving forward!
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Thanks Maria, don't worry about the delay 💙💙💙 @mariajluque
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Congratulations on your story, I loved it, I admire all the illustration. Continue like this
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