Hi Marisa
I loved the story and how you did it, the round letter solution for the grandfather and the text font for the protagonist is great. If I had to tell you something, which is not totally important, is that some of your texts seem scanned from a notebook, so some of them could be increased just a little bit more, as much as they can.
The better everything is read, the better !!!
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Professeur PlusHi Marisa
I loved the story and how you did it, the round letter solution for the grandfather and the text font for the protagonist is great. If I had to tell you something, which is not totally important, is that some of your texts seem scanned from a notebook, so some of them could be increased just a little bit more, as much as they can.
The better everything is read, the better !!!
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@gallardo Thanks for commenting Miguel!
Yes, it is true that the scanned texts are smaller and less defined. I'm going to improve it. Thanks again!
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