Really, this video was very low budget, me acting as DP, director, editor and producer, it was a challenge but everything came out, I feel good for having made this music video, and I share my art with you, I hope the teacher will give me your most sincere opinion to learn more from the criticism.
Greetings, I'm William Tique.
It seemed to me that technically it has some flaws, lack of focus in some parts, the lighting does not meet the objective because there is not much contrast. That is, dark grays are seen but not pure blacks competing with high lights or very strong colors. I find that variety is lacking in camera shots and lighting, it feels very flat.
I'm the same as everyone, apprentice. It is my opinion but I am totally attentive to your comments and criticisms.
@tiquew I think the class is low-budget videos, and I think I explained it above that it was very very low cost. And I was practically the crew, well let's say a person who took a light, but I don't expect to see your work and that it is not as flat as you say, thanks for commenting.
Well Eric, I've already seen your video. I will start by saying that for me it is not easy to evaluate your work in a totally honest way, since as students I have a special affection for you and also the fact that most of you reach the final project without completing the previous exercises, makes it impossible for follow your evolution / preparation of it, which would make me feel closer to my advice. I say this, because in most cases there is a component that overconditions the result of the video, and it is the song!
For me in your video there is a main burden that is the song and its interpretation, which in my opinion makes your video be conditioned by an interpretation, for my taste not very real. But what happens with famous singers who also mark the playback excessively. To that I could add an absence of history, since you start with an introduction with the mobile and the notebook, but do not return to it, to focus on a choreography and interpretation of the song that does not evolve anywhere. For all this, I do not care in this case the use of colors or lights, because it does not seem the most important thing to me. In fact I think that black and white shots are fine, and perhaps it would have been a more aesthetically decisive option to show the entire video in those tones and lights, (beyoncé? ...)
For me, Erick has plenty of intro (be careful with the abuse of effects ..) and as I say sometimes less is more, think to edit everything in black and white, with fewer cuts, the shots that you consider to be beautiful, hold them.
But in any case, I understand you very well when you say that you did everything, I could tell you a thousand secrets of my videos where in many I have done the work of 10 people. For this I congratulate you, because the important thing is to do it, and see the mistakes but also the successes! And it seems to me that you have sincerely exposed yourself to everyone and that for me is very valuable. Keep growing, and I'm sure your next video will have a better bill!
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Greetings Erick, I did not want to bother. Only that a conversation should start from somewhere. I pay attention to the technical aspects, the teacher makes you comment on the narration. We are all learning, that's what it's all about.
I will upload my first work with great emotion so that everyone can comment on it, I consider it an immense favor that you will do me.
Brotherly embrace.
Greetings Erick, I really liked your video, I like how you integrate those somewhat fluorine colors at some point, I think that for pop music there are things that are super important, (from my point of view), which is dance and integration of the rhythm in video, I don't know if the out of focus is intentional, but it gives me the impression that they also contribute something special to the video, in general I congratulate you !!! I liked it a lot, a hug!
@nelsonhuerta00 thank you, I value your opinion and the points you made, we will continue learning.
and another music video is coming out there, so I'll share it with you, thank you very much.
I have worked on clips with limited budget, 30 team people, light truck, generator ... etc. The technical part is money ... a lot of money. Taking into account the conditions in which the result was made, it is more than satisfactory. There is only one thing that makes me noise and it is the appliance that the singer has in her mouth ... would it be crazy before facing a production so ask the talent to consult with their dentist to remove the orthodontic appliance from their mouth?
Can digital development techniques be applied to video?
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Really, this video was very low budget, me acting as DP, director, editor and producer, it was a challenge but everything came out, I feel good for having made this music video, and I share my art with you, I hope the teacher will give me your most sincere opinion to learn more from the criticism.
thanks!
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PlusGreetings, I'm William Tique.
It seemed to me that technically it has some flaws, lack of focus in some parts, the lighting does not meet the objective because there is not much contrast. That is, dark grays are seen but not pure blacks competing with high lights or very strong colors. I find that variety is lacking in camera shots and lighting, it feels very flat.
I'm the same as everyone, apprentice. It is my opinion but I am totally attentive to your comments and criticisms.
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@tiquew I think the class is low-budget videos, and I think I explained it above that it was very very low cost. And I was practically the crew, well let's say a person who took a light, but I don't expect to see your work and that it is not as flat as you say, thanks for commenting.
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Professeur PlusWell Eric, I've already seen your video. I will start by saying that for me it is not easy to evaluate your work in a totally honest way, since as students I have a special affection for you and also the fact that most of you reach the final project without completing the previous exercises, makes it impossible for follow your evolution / preparation of it, which would make me feel closer to my advice. I say this, because in most cases there is a component that overconditions the result of the video, and it is the song!
For me in your video there is a main burden that is the song and its interpretation, which in my opinion makes your video be conditioned by an interpretation, for my taste not very real. But what happens with famous singers who also mark the playback excessively. To that I could add an absence of history, since you start with an introduction with the mobile and the notebook, but do not return to it, to focus on a choreography and interpretation of the song that does not evolve anywhere. For all this, I do not care in this case the use of colors or lights, because it does not seem the most important thing to me. In fact I think that black and white shots are fine, and perhaps it would have been a more aesthetically decisive option to show the entire video in those tones and lights, (beyoncé? ...)
For me, Erick has plenty of intro (be careful with the abuse of effects ..) and as I say sometimes less is more, think to edit everything in black and white, with fewer cuts, the shots that you consider to be beautiful, hold them.
But in any case, I understand you very well when you say that you did everything, I could tell you a thousand secrets of my videos where in many I have done the work of 10 people. For this I congratulate you, because the important thing is to do it, and see the mistakes but also the successes! And it seems to me that you have sincerely exposed yourself to everyone and that for me is very valuable. Keep growing, and I'm sure your next video will have a better bill!
A cordial hug
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@juanmacarrillo thank you very much I appreciate your advice very much, and we will continue creating nothing.
for the next video I will put everything step by step. THANKS!
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Greetings Erick, I did not want to bother. Only that a conversation should start from somewhere. I pay attention to the technical aspects, the teacher makes you comment on the narration. We are all learning, that's what it's all about.
I will upload my first work with great emotion so that everyone can comment on it, I consider it an immense favor that you will do me.
Brotherly embrace.
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Greetings Erick, I really liked your video, I like how you integrate those somewhat fluorine colors at some point, I think that for pop music there are things that are super important, (from my point of view), which is dance and integration of the rhythm in video, I don't know if the out of focus is intentional, but it gives me the impression that they also contribute something special to the video, in general I congratulate you !!! I liked it a lot, a hug!
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@nelsonhuerta00 thank you, I value your opinion and the points you made, we will continue learning.
and another music video is coming out there, so I'll share it with you, thank you very much.
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I have worked on clips with limited budget, 30 team people, light truck, generator ... etc. The technical part is money ... a lot of money. Taking into account the conditions in which the result was made, it is more than satisfactory. There is only one thing that makes me noise and it is the appliance that the singer has in her mouth ... would it be crazy before facing a production so ask the talent to consult with their dentist to remove the orthodontic appliance from their mouth?
Can digital development techniques be applied to video?
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thanks brother, lol if the topic is always money.
but with everything clear it is done.
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