You have been able to apply the light technique without any obvious cut but I see some aspects that should be polished.
The first would be the beam of light on the ground, I see it somewhat hard and "sharp". In other words, the light / dark transition could be smoother (especially on the ground).
On the other hand I think you would have to rethink the treatment of the exterior / sky. I think you have tried to avoid overexposure and that has ended up creating a rather strange HDR effect where an exterior is too unreal (especially in the part of the sky and clouds)
Putting it to polish, I would also invite you to work a little more framing with the environment. If you have a space like this, it would be nice to have centered the composition a little more (align the model / camera so that they do not appear off-center and unbalance the image)
That said, practical practice and more practice.
Take heart with it!
Thank you very much Ibai for your comments, the truth is that the "site" was something forbidden and the rush did not make me see on the screen that the model was in the middle correctly. The "hard" light areas on the floor are light inputs through the holes in the ceiling and by only having a handheld flash it was difficult to compensate, and the background wanted it to be unreal, the photo speaks of the destruction of the world that it makes the human being. Anyway, I'm going to go back to the location hahaha to repeat it and take a couple more photos than I have planned. Learning from the first photo.
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Professeur PlusHi @beavaz ,
You have been able to apply the light technique without any obvious cut but I see some aspects that should be polished.
The first would be the beam of light on the ground, I see it somewhat hard and "sharp". In other words, the light / dark transition could be smoother (especially on the ground).
On the other hand I think you would have to rethink the treatment of the exterior / sky. I think you have tried to avoid overexposure and that has ended up creating a rather strange HDR effect where an exterior is too unreal (especially in the part of the sky and clouds)
Putting it to polish, I would also invite you to work a little more framing with the environment. If you have a space like this, it would be nice to have centered the composition a little more (align the model / camera so that they do not appear off-center and unbalance the image)
That said, practical practice and more practice.
Take heart with it!
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Thank you very much Ibai for your comments, the truth is that the "site" was something forbidden and the rush did not make me see on the screen that the model was in the middle correctly. The "hard" light areas on the floor are light inputs through the holes in the ceiling and by only having a handheld flash it was difficult to compensate, and the background wanted it to be unreal, the photo speaks of the destruction of the world that it makes the human being. Anyway, I'm going to go back to the location hahaha to repeat it and take a couple more photos than I have planned. Learning from the first photo.
A hug! Bea
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