@lagos Sorry, I had @lagos your project Thank you for sharing it! I see that you have made good use of the program's tools and have worked the narrative rhythm very well. The combination of gray / greenish colors with reds and pinks is very good. I would encourage you to try the texture tools, so that everything is not so digital. And perhaps be careful with the very closed planes, which do not leave air anywhere. I would try to make some bullets have a less focused composition. Finally, I would be careful with the size of the streets between the vignettes, as it varies and is rare.
I'm really glad I helped you and I hope this new process will prove useful to you in your future comics.
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Professeur Plus@lagos Sorry, I had @lagos your project Thank you for sharing it! I see that you have made good use of the program's tools and have worked the narrative rhythm very well. The combination of gray / greenish colors with reds and pinks is very good. I would encourage you to try the texture tools, so that everything is not so digital. And perhaps be careful with the very closed planes, which do not leave air anywhere. I would try to make some bullets have a less focused composition. Finally, I would be careful with the size of the streets between the vignettes, as it varies and is rare.
I'm really glad I helped you and I hope this new process will prove useful to you in your future comics.
A hug and good luck!
Ana
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Thank you very much for your advice! I will keep them in mind. And thank you for this great course. A hug.
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