A great piece with beautiful colours! In the final illustration, I noticed her back arm goes to nowhere. It's important to show exactly where it's going for your audience! I'd also recommend moving the perspective down a bit so the curb in the BG isn't directly behind her head. It's a bit distracting and almost taking away from her pose. Good work!
@jackiedroujko Thank you for all the advice Jackie, I'll try to apply those for my future drawings. And thank you for such an informative and fun course!
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Professeur PlusA great piece with beautiful colours! In the final illustration, I noticed her back arm goes to nowhere. It's important to show exactly where it's going for your audience! I'd also recommend moving the perspective down a bit so the curb in the BG isn't directly behind her head. It's a bit distracting and almost taking away from her pose. Good work!
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@jackiedroujko Thank you for all the advice Jackie, I'll try to apply those for my future drawings. And thank you for such an informative and fun course!
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