No matter how good this image is, I cannot consider a single photo as a course project, since this workshop is audiovisual and, therefore, what is required is to send moving images that make up a sequence or, ideally, a complete story. If you are going to do it with photos, at least try to develop a story with different images.
The reason I tell you all this is because what I want is for you to practice and understand how to generate an aesthetic for a project and how to defend it during an entire job, with the difficulties that this entails.
That said, the photo is very cool. I think you can play with a little less light to make it more suggestive. You can even try making one of the two lights less intense than the other to generate more volume. But I really like the model's gesture, that sideways face with the hair on top is very powerful. Bravo for the framing and the choice of position.
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Professeur PlusHello Victor.
No matter how good this image is, I cannot consider a single photo as a course project, since this workshop is audiovisual and, therefore, what is required is to send moving images that make up a sequence or, ideally, a complete story. If you are going to do it with photos, at least try to develop a story with different images.
The reason I tell you all this is because what I want is for you to practice and understand how to generate an aesthetic for a project and how to defend it during an entire job, with the difficulties that this entails.
That said, the photo is very cool. I think you can play with a little less light to make it more suggestive. You can even try making one of the two lights less intense than the other to generate more volume. But I really like the model's gesture, that sideways face with the hair on top is very powerful. Bravo for the framing and the choice of position.
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