Projet du cours
My project for course: Dynamic Vector Illustration: Keys to Color and Composition
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Thank you very much for your wonderful course. I have learnt a lot from your class. 10 out of 10 from me.
I'm looking forward to hear what you think about my work and if there is anything I need to improve, please let me know.
Thanks again, Pietari
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Professeur PlusLove the sketch, I struggle with transferring the sketch energy to the final piece as well.
I think the vector part feels a bit too flat. It's missing some depth, I think with some tones in the water and sky, perhaps darker and more defined shadows would help too. All the elements are there but I think the islands are a bit too close to the head of the guy and being darker color they steal the attention from the person, perhaps they could be in lighter tone and further away. Not sure about the soft clouds and shadows, I would try to define them a bit more also.
Thanks for sharing your work!
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Plus@studioposti thank you for your recommendations. I will fix my work :)
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