Well done. There is a lot going on that I lose sight of Patrick for a while, but that is to give the other characters room to have their stories. The key is to show their stories growing because of Patrick, and their changes linked to his actions and what he does. It reminds me of a film that also has a big group, The Goonies. There is still one central character among all the ones who have their own stories. Watch it if you haven't to see how to handle multiple characters really well. i think you can do it :)
@mboutroswrites Thank you very much, indeed there are many things going on, but this gives me a better idea of how I can put everything together and give my story more coherence... If I've seen the movie but it's been a long time, I'll watch it again to put more attention.
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Professeur PlusWell done. I will read this on Friday next week and give feedback. Looking forward to it and congratulations!
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Professeur PlusWell done. There is a lot going on that I lose sight of Patrick for a while, but that is to give the other characters room to have their stories. The key is to show their stories growing because of Patrick, and their changes linked to his actions and what he does. It reminds me of a film that also has a big group, The Goonies. There is still one central character among all the ones who have their own stories. Watch it if you haven't to see how to handle multiple characters really well. i think you can do it :)
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@mboutroswrites Thank you very much, indeed there are many things going on, but this gives me a better idea of how I can put everything together and give my story more coherence... If I've seen the movie but it's been a long time, I'll watch it again to put more attention.
I really love your course it helped me a lot
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