I congratulate you very much for your work. I really liked how your main character, Phoebe, goes from the planning to the scene you wrote: we see precisely the characteristics that you gave her, and it makes me want to keep reading. I also really like the way you show Reagan in your scene: in a very small space you make his whole character clear. Very well!
I hope you are encouraged to continue writing your story!
And remember that I'm still here in case you have questions that I can help you with.
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Professor PlusI congratulate you very much for your work. I really liked how your main character, Phoebe, goes from the planning to the scene you wrote: we see precisely the characteristics that you gave her, and it makes me want to keep reading. I also really like the way you show Reagan in your scene: in a very small space you make his whole character clear. Very well!
I hope you are encouraged to continue writing your story!
And remember that I'm still here in case you have questions that I can help you with.
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PlusThank you very much for your feedback Rachel. I'll finish it because I really liked working on it.
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