Wow! The level of detail in the drawings is great! Well done. I like the choice of font and how well the text fits together.
Speaking of the first image, I think it could have more contrast. A simple change that could be made would be to change the purple/lilac colors to a dark blue like the background. This would make the elements stand out more.
However, I really like the version without colors, with only strokes (Doodling phase). It's my favorite. I think it suited your style a lot. The strokes are minute and detailed and this makes the white text stand out as negative space. It turned out pretty cool!
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displayname1583431
Professor PlusWow! The level of detail in the drawings is great! Well done. I like the choice of font and how well the text fits together.
Speaking of the first image, I think it could have more contrast. A simple change that could be made would be to change the purple/lilac colors to a dark blue like the background. This would make the elements stand out more.
However, I really like the version without colors, with only strokes (Doodling phase). It's my favorite. I think it suited your style a lot. The strokes are minute and detailed and this makes the white text stand out as negative space. It turned out pretty cool!
Congratulations!
displayname2940235
Thanks! I'll put your critique to use, really enjoyed your course!
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