How nice that you came here! Congratulations on your project, we really like the illustration work you did and the variety of elements you integrate into the brand. A couple of comments as feedback:
- The variety of graphic elements and textures you have is good, but in the stickers/stamps you have to take care of the sizes of the fonts so that it is legible and the color ties so that they feel part of the same universe.
- The pattern of the snake and the agave feels very linear, you could explore a random arrangement that generates more texture. If you like the idea of linear it might be better to do it diagonally and with smaller illustrations.
- It would help a lot to understand the universe of the brand if you added some mockups or visualizations of the products with the brand application to your presentation.
Thank you for being part of the course! We wish you much success.
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Professor PlusHello Fabry!
How nice that you came here! Congratulations on your project, we really like the illustration work you did and the variety of elements you integrate into the brand. A couple of comments as feedback:
- The variety of graphic elements and textures you have is good, but in the stickers/stamps you have to take care of the sizes of the fonts so that it is legible and the color ties so that they feel part of the same universe.
- The pattern of the snake and the agave feels very linear, you could explore a random arrangement that generates more texture. If you like the idea of linear it might be better to do it diagonally and with smaller illustrations.
- It would help a lot to understand the universe of the brand if you added some mockups or visualizations of the products with the brand application to your presentation.
Thank you for being part of the course! We wish you much success.
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