This is fantastic Emma! I think if your portfolio to send to agencies was full of this kind of detailed and rich work then you'd get some book work in no time!
The colours work really nicely together and create a calm atmosphere and all the little details and textures are wonderful.
My only small note would be a little tip for finished work is to blur your eyes (If you can! You can also blur in Photoshop etc) and you can see what is coming across as a focal piece. When I do this with yours I see the eyes pop out (which is great because the face is where you want to draw attention) but I also see that horse picture as quite dark and stands out maybe more than intended. I would soften the colour of the horse -maybe to something similar to the giraffe frame and maybe even ever so slightly darken the paper colour and I think you'll find a balance.
That's such a small note for a great piece but something I find quite useful when I'm making book pages so I hope this was helpful! Thank you so much for taking this course! Best of luck!
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Professor PlusThis is fantastic Emma! I think if your portfolio to send to agencies was full of this kind of detailed and rich work then you'd get some book work in no time!
The colours work really nicely together and create a calm atmosphere and all the little details and textures are wonderful.
My only small note would be a little tip for finished work is to blur your eyes (If you can! You can also blur in Photoshop etc) and you can see what is coming across as a focal piece. When I do this with yours I see the eyes pop out (which is great because the face is where you want to draw attention) but I also see that horse picture as quite dark and stands out maybe more than intended. I would soften the colour of the horse -maybe to something similar to the giraffe frame and maybe even ever so slightly darken the paper colour and I think you'll find a balance.
That's such a small note for a great piece but something I find quite useful when I'm making book pages so I hope this was helpful! Thank you so much for taking this course! Best of luck!
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Plus@maddy_vian thank you so much, that makes me so happy! I will definately start to blur my eyes, that is a great tip! Thank you!
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Wow, amazing. Children's books are cute and you have a very good character.
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