Hello Yunic, congratulations on having finished your project!
I really see that you captured the intention of the course very well, which is to be able to communicate the personality of a place through the details, taking responsibility from the logo.
If you want to do even better, my only feedback would be on the logo. I consider that the typeface is very thin compared to the "A" so the word loses a bit of force. If you look at the menu application, the word "MENU" has much more impact than the logo itself. So here are several possible solutions:
1. Balance the thickness of the letter A, using a less thick typeface ... try a Regular, for example (leaving the most in bold).
2. Remove the resource from the largest initial, making everything the same.
3. (The easiest) - Never use the logo next to a bold word that is the same size, as in the case of the Menu, so your logo does not lose strength ... In this case: remove the logos from the menu.
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displayname2906586
Professor PlusHello Yunic, congratulations on having finished your project!
I really see that you captured the intention of the course very well, which is to be able to communicate the personality of a place through the details, taking responsibility from the logo.
If you want to do even better, my only feedback would be on the logo. I consider that the typeface is very thin compared to the "A" so the word loses a bit of force. If you look at the menu application, the word "MENU" has much more impact than the logo itself. So here are several possible solutions:
1. Balance the thickness of the letter A, using a less thick typeface ... try a Regular, for example (leaving the most in bold).
2. Remove the resource from the largest initial, making everything the same.
3. (The easiest) - Never use the logo next to a bold word that is the same size, as in the case of the Menu, so your logo does not lose strength ... In this case: remove the logos from the menu.
Once again congratulations!
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I Want to do better !!!! :D
I'm grateful to you for spending so much time telling me what was wrong with the logo
thanks to that, I will improve again
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