Projekt z kursu
Il Veliero - Lucio Battisti (1976)
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First of all thanks for the great course, I learned some new tricks and way to work on this kind of project.
I decided to make the cover of this great 70's song: Il Veliero from Lucio Battisti.
I recently bought a drawing tablet so I need to practice.
I'm quite happy with the result, but I think that the next time I will spent more time on sketching on paper.
I'm a little perplex for the colours and for the lettering of "Il Veliero".
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Prowadzący PlusThanks so much for posting your project.
I hope the course has helped you - it was designed to point you in the right direction- to put you on the right path. This is a great start - if you can look back at it and see where you can improve next time it’s very positive.
I like where you were going with this and the lettering is definitely heading in the right direction- I think there could have been more cohesion between the illustrated elements and the lettering- by making all the pieces bigger and making the gaps between them very small I think would have helped pull the final design together better.
On colour, be careful laying red over dark colours - can be difficult to read:)) - try squinting your eyes to judge if it’s still readable.
Thanks for being part of the course and best of luck with future projects
Steve
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Thanks for the answer. Yes I discovered typography with this course, I never thought I could work with this kind of expression. I was tooken by enthusiasm so let's say I did some parts to fast, because I wanted to see the final piece. But for sure the next time I will, work slower and more precise.
Yes perhaps filling up the space better and making the hole thing cohabited better.
Thanks for the squinting eyes tip!
Have a nice day!
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