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You have some interesting textures. The Koala's fur looks great. Likewise the texture of the bark of the tree. In general it looks good and you can see that you handle the pencil with some ease. I congratulate you.
On the other hand, I think that even though the koala's texture is fine, you can work it a bit more to refine it better. Suddenly, with an H mark, go over the entire surface of the koala to prep certain lines that dissonant a bit. The same happens with the bark of the tree. I repeat, they are fine but I think you can refine them a bit more.
I think the biggest problem is in the tones and it is that they are all very similar. Perhaps a softer tone in the background would have helped to highlight more the koala that we have in the foreground, but if you look closely, the tones of the koala on the face are a bit confused with the background you made behind. The same thing happens with the koala and the tree. There are textures that get a bit confused and it takes a bit of work to distinguish the tree from the koala. Especially in the lower part, where the bulb of the tree blends with the koala's fur. Perhaps darkening the trunk would help you differentiate these two elements.
Note that the trees you have in the background differ very well from the koala. This because they are two very different tones. (the background trees and the koala)
Another recommendation and it is an error that I have seen repeatedly is the photo of the work. Try to take a photo with better light and that it does not look blurry so that we, the viewers, can better appreciate your work.
Anyway, in terms of textures it is very good. That is not easy to achieve, you have to be a good observer and you are. As for lights, it is something that needs to be studied a little more. I don't know if you made up the image or took it from a photo. If it is from a photo, try to put it in Photoshop in grayscale so that it gives you the tones and you can better see the difference between them. If it's a photo, try taking a black and white photocopy of it so you can see the tones.
Thank you for participating in the course and letting me be part of your learning process.
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You have some interesting textures. The Koala's fur looks great. Likewise the texture of the bark of the tree. In general it looks good and you can see that you handle the pencil with some ease. I congratulate you.
On the other hand, I think that even though the koala's texture is fine, you can work it a bit more to refine it better. Suddenly, with an H mark, go over the entire surface of the koala to prep certain lines that dissonant a bit. The same happens with the bark of the tree. I repeat, they are fine but I think you can refine them a bit more.
I think the biggest problem is in the tones and it is that they are all very similar. Perhaps a softer tone in the background would have helped to highlight more the koala that we have in the foreground, but if you look closely, the tones of the koala on the face are a bit confused with the background you made behind. The same thing happens with the koala and the tree. There are textures that get a bit confused and it takes a bit of work to distinguish the tree from the koala. Especially in the lower part, where the bulb of the tree blends with the koala's fur. Perhaps darkening the trunk would help you differentiate these two elements.
Note that the trees you have in the background differ very well from the koala. This because they are two very different tones. (the background trees and the koala)
Another recommendation and it is an error that I have seen repeatedly is the photo of the work. Try to take a photo with better light and that it does not look blurry so that we, the viewers, can better appreciate your work.
Anyway, in terms of textures it is very good. That is not easy to achieve, you have to be a good observer and you are. As for lights, it is something that needs to be studied a little more. I don't know if you made up the image or took it from a photo. If it is from a photo, try to put it in Photoshop in grayscale so that it gives you the tones and you can better see the difference between them. If it's a photo, try taking a black and white photocopy of it so you can see the tones.
Thank you for participating in the course and letting me be part of your learning process.
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