How cool that you launched the first project in Illustrator with my course :D
It was well done and the integration of elements and text is very good. Some details:
- In the green balloon at the top, it seems to me that the colors are above the line. This made the balloon line appear thinner than the other elements.
- On smaller objects like the "Joy" cubes, I think it looks cleaner if we don't use shading hatches. It ends up giving a different density, you know? On large objects, it's okay to use more details, shading with lines.
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It was well done and the integration of elements and text is very good. Some details:
- In the green balloon at the top, it seems to me that the colors are above the line. This made the balloon line appear thinner than the other elements.
- On smaller objects like the "Joy" cubes, I think it looks cleaner if we don't use shading hatches. It ends up giving a different density, you know? On large objects, it's okay to use more details, shading with lines.
The color choice is good for the theme.
Congratulations!
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