Very good work. The poster is very very good. Just point out a couple of corrections.
The paragraph 'Art is all forms of expression etc.' It has a slightly complicated flag. It is recommended that you lower the small particles (de, que, sus, lo, etc.) to the next line so that they do not break your flag. Furthermore, it is advisable that in such small texts with so much prominence, you balance the long and short lines. That 'surrounds' is only on one line makes no sense and breaks the structure of the paragraph.
I also don't see much sense in Mexico being italicized in the title.
Lastly, tell you that Ricardo Luevanos' script should be a line and that the hour script should have a much smaller space.
The rest is very good: the ordinal, the date, the acronyms, the spelling are perfect. Good job!
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Very good work. The poster is very very good. Just point out a couple of corrections.
The paragraph 'Art is all forms of expression etc.' It has a slightly complicated flag. It is recommended that you lower the small particles (de, que, sus, lo, etc.) to the next line so that they do not break your flag. Furthermore, it is advisable that in such small texts with so much prominence, you balance the long and short lines. That 'surrounds' is only on one line makes no sense and breaks the structure of the paragraph.
I also don't see much sense in Mexico being italicized in the title.
Lastly, tell you that Ricardo Luevanos' script should be a line and that the hour script should have a much smaller space.
The rest is very good: the ordinal, the date, the acronyms, the spelling are perfect. Good job!
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