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So, this is another page. I forgot to take a picture after inking it...
This is more like the task in the course.
First tier says: Our first walks were rather chaotic.
Second: With four years they looked a little different./First blind there wasn't much "walking"./But after a couple of months he was back to his old self.
Third: Ever since turning ten, the beginnings of our walks look very much like this .../ ... and after half of the walk we go back like this.
Can't wait for your thoughts. :)
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@phasesevencomics : I might have posted it in the wrong spot ...
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Prowadzący Plus@ulibrauns I found it! Thanks for the translation. I like how you are letting the natural boundary of the watercolors act as the panel border. That combined with slightly larger gutters makes it all very clear. In the last tier, I love the gesture drawing - as a reader I can feel the pull of the leash. It might be interesting to flip the compositions so that as the dog is being dragged out it's right-to-left (against the reading flow) then when the dog is happily heading home it's left-to-right (with the reading flow). It might farther emphasize the struggle. Great work!
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@phasesevencomics Thank you so much! It's so funny, I always see left to be home ... moving away from left is always leaving home. My mind is funny sometimes. But of course you are very right about directing the flow and energy. Will implement this in future compositions (and have a think about why home always has to be left in my mind and what I can do about that ;) ).
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