Hi Williams! I thank you for your words and on the other hand I am also very grateful that you have taken the course.
Speaking of your work there are many things to highlight. From the beginning, with the "pre-sketches" I realize that you understand illustration and that you have been practicing it for a long time.
In the second step, the sketch, I think it's fine for you to understand the work, but I think an Art Director would get lost a bit. I would recommend that when you are working with clients that the sketch is a little more defined so that the Art Director understands what you want to propose and thus also save time by leaving everything a little clearer from the beginning. I do not want to say that the sketch is wrong, it is clear to me that you understand where you want to take your work, but for a client a more defined line would help him understand everything better.
Now, speaking of the paragraph you wrote and the illustration, I think there is a very good connection between the two. The one complements the other and that is the idea of the illustration: Reinforce a text and even feed it.
I love that you decide to pass the work to the sheet directly and without drawing it, this speaks of you trust your line and you have a great handling of the drawing.
Finally the technique is very well achieved. The textures are exquisite, the composition is very interesting and well balanced, the management of spaces and the depth that you achieved thanks to the good use of light is a great success and your characters are charming. Very good work. I congratulate you.
Thank you again for your participation and for sharing the entire process of your work. See you soon
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Speaking of your work there are many things to highlight. From the beginning, with the "pre-sketches" I realize that you understand illustration and that you have been practicing it for a long time.
In the second step, the sketch, I think it's fine for you to understand the work, but I think an Art Director would get lost a bit. I would recommend that when you are working with clients that the sketch is a little more defined so that the Art Director understands what you want to propose and thus also save time by leaving everything a little clearer from the beginning. I do not want to say that the sketch is wrong, it is clear to me that you understand where you want to take your work, but for a client a more defined line would help him understand everything better.
Now, speaking of the paragraph you wrote and the illustration, I think there is a very good connection between the two. The one complements the other and that is the idea of the illustration: Reinforce a text and even feed it.
I love that you decide to pass the work to the sheet directly and without drawing it, this speaks of you trust your line and you have a great handling of the drawing.
Finally the technique is very well achieved. The textures are exquisite, the composition is very interesting and well balanced, the management of spaces and the depth that you achieved thanks to the good use of light is a great success and your characters are charming. Very good work. I congratulate you.
Thank you again for your participation and for sharing the entire process of your work. See you soon
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