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I WILL DO IT! by Riddhi Maniar - Project for the course: Creating Children's Stories

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Synopsis:

Ro turns three years old.

And, with that, he becomes bold.

He sets out to do everything that BIG people do.

Be it using real hammers or vacuum cleaners too!

But he doesn’t really know how to.

So someone has to always come to his rescue.

He keeps his family on their toes.

He hears them saying ‘Arrghs’ and ‘Oh NOs’.

And, what happens when he cannot do anything one day?

Does he still have his way?

Please note: Since I am a writer and not an illustrator, the images used in the making of this book are just for visual guidance to complement the story, as a final project. No copyright infringement is intended.

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  • displayname3599381

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    20.05.2021 o 20:08
    user3599381 surname3599381

    Hi Riddhi,

    Congratulations on your daily history. I love this theme, I have a book called "I AM NO MORE BABY", which talks about a girl who thinks she can do everything on her own.
    I would further develop the dialogues between Ro and other characters, funny scenes can come out. This age loves funny scenes.
    I liked the end of your story,
    Regarding the illustrations, I believe that your text asked for very humorous illustrations.

    All best
    Ilan

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  • displayname6656850

    21.05.2021 o 07:26
    user6656850 surname6656850

    Dear Ilan @ibrenman

    Thank you very much for your valuable feedback. This is based on the situation me and my family encounter with our 3 year old son every day. :D

    Yes, I loved your story 'I Am No More a Baby' and I realised my story belongs to a similar theme.

    Let me try to develop the dialogues and see the turn it takes. I wish I could illustrate to bring the funny situations to life :)

    I wanted to take this opportunity to thank you for the amazing course, in which you have given very precise and practical tips. It is already helping me in taking baby steps towards my goal of writing children's books. You have earned a fan for life!

    Cheers,
    Riddhi

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