Very good Monica!
I like the use of colors to explain the story and how you used horizontal reading to build the sequence. I think the boxes work very well to highlight the main characters or to make those who no longer interest disappear ... Was that your idea?
@del_hambre yes, that was the idea, as if it were a bar and they went in and out of the doors. Anyway I don't like the result very much ... I like the idea, the colors etc, but something is wrong and I think it is the line or the drawings themselves. I have to try other strokes or other brushes ... I always have a hard time doing things natural because I see mistakes ... and I end up perfecting it and leaving it worse. Not this anymore, if not in general ... I like what seems to be done by hand, but in the end I leave everything without failures and it remains artificial (well, as a vector). I want and I can't 😅
@shanaz00_ilustra , if it helps you I can tell you that I understand you perfectly.
Exactly the same thing happens to me and it has cost me a lot, let's say to accept those imperfections.
... And I think our whole lives will continue to pass us by.
XD
That is why perhaps what I tell you about doing the same thing several times or variations ... on the one hand you try things that you will surely take advantage of in the future and on the other I think that you are getting used to seeing failures as part of the drawing. And in the end you end up incorporating everything in a natural way or you realize at least if they help you tell what you want.
If you feel like it, I suggest that you do a couple of style exercises on this one that you did and take it to another aesthetic. But exercises of style and aesthetics within your roll. Choose things of yours that you like on an aesthetic level, put on some traffic lights yourself to close more or less a final finish and so you can tell it in another way and see what it asks of you!
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Prowadzący PlusVery good Monica!
I like the use of colors to explain the story and how you used horizontal reading to build the sequence. I think the boxes work very well to highlight the main characters or to make those who no longer interest disappear ... Was that your idea?
For those who want to listen to the song:
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@del_hambre yes, that was the idea, as if it were a bar and they went in and out of the doors. Anyway I don't like the result very much ... I like the idea, the colors etc, but something is wrong and I think it is the line or the drawings themselves. I have to try other strokes or other brushes ... I always have a hard time doing things natural because I see mistakes ... and I end up perfecting it and leaving it worse. Not this anymore, if not in general ... I like what seems to be done by hand, but in the end I leave everything without failures and it remains artificial (well, as a vector). I want and I can't 😅
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Prowadzący Plus@shanaz00_ilustra , if it helps you I can tell you that I understand you perfectly.
Exactly the same thing happens to me and it has cost me a lot, let's say to accept those imperfections.
... And I think our whole lives will continue to pass us by.
XD
That is why perhaps what I tell you about doing the same thing several times or variations ... on the one hand you try things that you will surely take advantage of in the future and on the other I think that you are getting used to seeing failures as part of the drawing. And in the end you end up incorporating everything in a natural way or you realize at least if they help you tell what you want.
If you feel like it, I suggest that you do a couple of style exercises on this one that you did and take it to another aesthetic. But exercises of style and aesthetics within your roll. Choose things of yours that you like on an aesthetic level, put on some traffic lights yourself to close more or less a final finish and so you can tell it in another way and see what it asks of you!
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