Dear Marta,
I would love to hear more about what your intention/ concept was for your project.
I really like the location and light situation you chose because it is both calm and does not take away attention from you. I like the idea of playing with the star-figure and the way you paid attention to your hand and feet.
Only two things come to my mind that you could consider next time: chose an outfit that is less distracting (right now the yellow and bluish tone of the pants draw quite some attention away from you as a person). Maybe have a top and pants in the same color. Or remove the blue tones later in editing.
Also I would love to see if you could experiment even more with the star. Can you stick a hole arm through, can you stick your head through. Maybe even sticking all arms, legs and head through? :)
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Docent PlusDear Marta,
I would love to hear more about what your intention/ concept was for your project.
I really like the location and light situation you chose because it is both calm and does not take away attention from you. I like the idea of playing with the star-figure and the way you paid attention to your hand and feet.
Only two things come to my mind that you could consider next time: chose an outfit that is less distracting (right now the yellow and bluish tone of the pants draw quite some attention away from you as a person). Maybe have a top and pants in the same color. Or remove the blue tones later in editing.
Also I would love to see if you could experiment even more with the star. Can you stick a hole arm through, can you stick your head through. Maybe even sticking all arms, legs and head through? :)
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Ok if I wanted to wear a single color .. and I'll take it to make another thank you Laura
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