The presentation of your work is very professional. It looks great with the pink space you left on the sides and makes the viewer focus on the piece, very well done. Although it seems simple, the theme of the presentation is a recurring failure in the artists. I applaud that you keep that in mind. However, it is when I detail the piece that I begin to notice that suddenly the photo you took of the illustration has some strange contrasts, which I would attribute to the specifications you gave to the photo. (Suddenly some effects that you added, which look a bit exaggerated, but with some practice, you will be able to sharpen the eye so that they look better.
You are making an illustration for a metaphorical phrase full of poetry, which allows your illustration to have a similar load and I think you did it well. It is easy for me to relate the phrase with the image I am seeing and more than a reference to the text it is a complement. This is for me the most complicated part of illustration: creating concepts.
The technique is not bad. There are good contrasts, interesting fades, and well-placed highlights. I think you did a good job. I congratulate you.
I appreciate the effort you put into the class and I hope you enjoyed it a lot.
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Docent PlusThe presentation of your work is very professional. It looks great with the pink space you left on the sides and makes the viewer focus on the piece, very well done. Although it seems simple, the theme of the presentation is a recurring failure in the artists. I applaud that you keep that in mind. However, it is when I detail the piece that I begin to notice that suddenly the photo you took of the illustration has some strange contrasts, which I would attribute to the specifications you gave to the photo. (Suddenly some effects that you added, which look a bit exaggerated, but with some practice, you will be able to sharpen the eye so that they look better.
You are making an illustration for a metaphorical phrase full of poetry, which allows your illustration to have a similar load and I think you did it well. It is easy for me to relate the phrase with the image I am seeing and more than a reference to the text it is a complement. This is for me the most complicated part of illustration: creating concepts.
The technique is not bad. There are good contrasts, interesting fades, and well-placed highlights. I think you did a good job. I congratulate you.
I appreciate the effort you put into the class and I hope you enjoyed it a lot.
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