Very good job Luis !! I like that you have added another character and enriched the story of your composition! Very good work! As a feedback, you could add a bit of "fog" or "mist" on top of darth vader to give it a little more depth, this will tell the brain that it is further away than your character in the foreground :). Another thing is that you can use the fire on the left side as justification to create a clipping light in your foreground character, on the right side and this will make its outline better noticeable, I see that you used the fire behind to separate it from the bottom, well done there!
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Docent PlusVery good job Luis !! I like that you have added another character and enriched the story of your composition! Very good work! As a feedback, you could add a bit of "fog" or "mist" on top of darth vader to give it a little more depth, this will tell the brain that it is further away than your character in the foreground :). Another thing is that you can use the fire on the left side as justification to create a clipping light in your foreground character, on the right side and this will make its outline better noticeable, I see that you used the fire behind to separate it from the bottom, well done there!
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Thanks a lot! I will take into consideration the recommended arrangements and appreciate the compliments of my composition. It means a lot.
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