Hi Virginia! Congratulations on finishing the project for this course! We had not read you before in the forum so I was left with the intrigue of knowing a little more about you, your concerns, and this project you were working on. Do you think you would like to continue this story? I think what you tell happens to all of us and surely you must have more stories like this to tell. I think it might be a good idea to keep collecting these everyday situations. Tell us!
@mariajluque forgive me, I have uploaded the final project! It's just that I couldn't show it before. I know it's more of a comic but that's what it has led me to. I am very interested in your opinion and the truth is that I loved the course, I am very happy to have done it. Kisses!
@virginia_brun Congratulations on the contest, I'm really happy! I think the story is very interesting and I really want to keep reading. Do you plan to continue it? I like the counterpoint between the two characters. The disbelieving boy can be a good excuse for Vir's character to tell him about the things he perceives about climate change. I also want to know what the link is between them. I like that the conversation happens in an informal way, around coffee, and it feels very fluid. I think that this monster that appears suggested generates intrigue and makes you want to know more about it.
I understand what you say that it is difficult for you to write, it happens to many of us! Glad the notebook is working. I think that if you want to continue this story, it can be useful to document yourself in forums / newspapers where the subject is discussed. Reading, for example, the comments recently made with that photo that appeared of the polar bear looking for food in a city can be very inspiring.
I like the reduced palette you used and also the layout of the pages. I find that resource that you used on the second page very interesting, when the characters are still talking but only their hands can be seen or what happens around with the bee.
I hope you continue this story!
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Docent PlusHi Virginia! Congratulations on finishing the project for this course! We had not read you before in the forum so I was left with the intrigue of knowing a little more about you, your concerns, and this project you were working on. Do you think you would like to continue this story? I think what you tell happens to all of us and surely you must have more stories like this to tell. I think it might be a good idea to keep collecting these everyday situations. Tell us!
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@mariajluque forgive me, I have uploaded the final project! It's just that I couldn't show it before. I know it's more of a comic but that's what it has led me to. I am very interested in your opinion and the truth is that I loved the course, I am very happy to have done it. Kisses!
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Docent Plus@virginia_brun Congratulations on the contest, I'm really happy! I think the story is very interesting and I really want to keep reading. Do you plan to continue it? I like the counterpoint between the two characters. The disbelieving boy can be a good excuse for Vir's character to tell him about the things he perceives about climate change. I also want to know what the link is between them. I like that the conversation happens in an informal way, around coffee, and it feels very fluid. I think that this monster that appears suggested generates intrigue and makes you want to know more about it.
I understand what you say that it is difficult for you to write, it happens to many of us! Glad the notebook is working. I think that if you want to continue this story, it can be useful to document yourself in forums / newspapers where the subject is discussed. Reading, for example, the comments recently made with that photo that appeared of the polar bear looking for food in a city can be very inspiring.
I like the reduced palette you used and also the layout of the pages. I find that resource that you used on the second page very interesting, when the characters are still talking but only their hands can be seen or what happens around with the bee.
I hope you continue this story!
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