Hi @damnguerrero . I like your poster because there is daring. It gives me the feeling that you have entered the course and have dared to risk. There are some things that are not right, or some that –although they are not wrong at all– typographically could work better.
The epigraphs or titles should not carry points. This is applicable to
The 48th installment | Hostesses | Fashion-religion, etc.
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The small capital that you have used "orchestrated by ..." does not need a capital letter in the proper noun. Everything would be more beautiful if there were no capital initial. It's not necessary, although I can't tell you it's wrong. In fact it is correct, but it is not aesthetic. As it is not necessary, I would remove it so that everything would be at the same box height.
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The moles that you have put between these concepts seem too powerful to me. Do not these that I have put seem more balanced? They are midpoints, not bullets / moles.
Rihanna Amal Clooney Donatella
05/07/2018 · Metropolitan Museum of New York
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Anglicisms are very well used and in general, a very good poster.
Hi @lalolagrafica
Whoops! More than a year ago I did this project, I digitally disconnected and I don't think I ever saw your answer.
But I think it was beneficial. A year ago I started with this new language that I wanted to learn. Now that I know your answer and have studied more related topics, I instantly understood the terms that made me check my notes before answering.
Today I have made this language my own, I agree with your observations, it would work much better typographically.
Thank you.
P.S. I noticed that I omitted the "v" in New York.
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Docent PlusHi @damnguerrero . I like your poster because there is daring. It gives me the feeling that you have entered the course and have dared to risk. There are some things that are not right, or some that –although they are not wrong at all– typographically could work better.
The epigraphs or titles should not carry points. This is applicable to
The 48th installment | Hostesses | Fashion-religion, etc.
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The small capital that you have used "orchestrated by ..." does not need a capital letter in the proper noun. Everything would be more beautiful if there were no capital initial. It's not necessary, although I can't tell you it's wrong. In fact it is correct, but it is not aesthetic. As it is not necessary, I would remove it so that everything would be at the same box height.
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The moles that you have put between these concepts seem too powerful to me. Do not these that I have put seem more balanced? They are midpoints, not bullets / moles.
Rihanna Amal Clooney Donatella
05/07/2018 · Metropolitan Museum of New York
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Anglicisms are very well used and in general, a very good poster.
Congratulations!
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Hi @lalolagrafica
Whoops! More than a year ago I did this project, I digitally disconnected and I don't think I ever saw your answer.
But I think it was beneficial. A year ago I started with this new language that I wanted to learn. Now that I know your answer and have studied more related topics, I instantly understood the terms that made me check my notes before answering.
Today I have made this language my own, I agree with your observations, it would work much better typographically.
Thank you.
P.S. I noticed that I omitted the "v" in New York.
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