The photos are very good, a very interesting use of color and makeup. To put some but, I would tell you that the model's eyes are too reddish in the cover photo, and that overall the photos become a bit repetitive.
Perhaps it would be nice to see a greater variety in the use of color, since the exercise you are looking for is to create an editorial in which, apart from recognizing the portrayed person, is seen in different positions and is more dynamic. General plans, details, I don't know ... see if you can give it a spin, because the proposal is good and so is the execution.
Thank you very much for your quick response and for your positive comments, encourage you to continue practicing.
Regarding how repetitive the photos are, I agree with you, but I admit that it is one of the main doubts I had. In this type of editorial, with such a specific characterization idea, would it be okay to include other photos of the character characterized as normal or just different? I considered the option of doing it both because of the lack of material with this characterization (we left it for the end of the session and we ran out of time) both because of the obvious monotony that it is done as a whole, but when in doubt I opted to give it continuity To the subject.
It depends on the needs of each publisher, it seems to me that the ones you put in are fine, they are different enough not to be repetitive. I do not really see it to put some without characterizing it, it seems to me that it is cool like that.
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The photos are very good, a very interesting use of color and makeup. To put some but, I would tell you that the model's eyes are too reddish in the cover photo, and that overall the photos become a bit repetitive.
Perhaps it would be nice to see a greater variety in the use of color, since the exercise you are looking for is to create an editorial in which, apart from recognizing the portrayed person, is seen in different positions and is more dynamic. General plans, details, I don't know ... see if you can give it a spin, because the proposal is good and so is the execution.
A greeting!
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Hi @jalvarinophoto ,
Thank you very much for your quick response and for your positive comments, encourage you to continue practicing.
Regarding how repetitive the photos are, I agree with you, but I admit that it is one of the main doubts I had. In this type of editorial, with such a specific characterization idea, would it be okay to include other photos of the character characterized as normal or just different? I considered the option of doing it both because of the lack of material with this characterization (we left it for the end of the session and we ran out of time) both because of the obvious monotony that it is done as a whole, but when in doubt I opted to give it continuity To the subject.
A greeting!
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Docent PlusHi @pabl0gallard0
It depends on the needs of each publisher, it seems to me that the ones you put in are fine, they are different enough not to be repetitive. I do not really see it to put some without characterizing it, it seems to me that it is cool like that.
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