It looks great Cristina! I wonder if you might want to share your whole collection here, not just the mock-up, then we can all see and appreciate all the hard work you've done, here in the project gallery?
Ah, this is much better! Now we can see your whole vision and whole collection. It looks great, but happy to provide a few comments to help it be the best it can be (if you agree of course). So, all of your coordinates -- they have a white background. This is not necessarily a program, but you want each print to 'deserve' its place -- so the more varied and different you can make them, the more they earn their place. If you are using and repeating elements from print to print, it helps to differentiate them from each other. The 3rd coordinate on the right -- because it has a white background and uses some of the same elements, it really looks quite similar to the one in the middle. So, I would suggest pushing them apart a bit -- color would be the easiest way to do this. By making one of them another color that's repeated in your palette, it will hold it's own a bit more and bring more visual variety to the collection. Make sense?
Thank you very much dear Elizabeth for your help! I will separate the colors and present to you again. I really appreciate your point of view and experience!
I have prepared some samples with colors. I was very happy to make them, thanks again for the advice! Why does a white line appear when presenting them that is not in the original model?
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Docent PlusIt looks great Cristina! I wonder if you might want to share your whole collection here, not just the mock-up, then we can all see and appreciate all the hard work you've done, here in the project gallery?
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I have expanded my presentation. I would be happy to receive comments.
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Docent PlusAh, this is much better! Now we can see your whole vision and whole collection. It looks great, but happy to provide a few comments to help it be the best it can be (if you agree of course). So, all of your coordinates -- they have a white background. This is not necessarily a program, but you want each print to 'deserve' its place -- so the more varied and different you can make them, the more they earn their place. If you are using and repeating elements from print to print, it helps to differentiate them from each other. The 3rd coordinate on the right -- because it has a white background and uses some of the same elements, it really looks quite similar to the one in the middle. So, I would suggest pushing them apart a bit -- color would be the easiest way to do this. By making one of them another color that's repeated in your palette, it will hold it's own a bit more and bring more visual variety to the collection. Make sense?
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PlusThank you very much dear Elizabeth for your help! I will separate the colors and present to you again. I really appreciate your point of view and experience!
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PlusI have prepared some samples with colors. I was very happy to make them, thanks again for the advice! Why does a white line appear when presenting them that is not in the original model?
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