Very good sequence. It has all the personality of science fiction intros that make a retrospective of somewhat random events but that in the end are a nod to a chain of events with a documentary spirit. The color management seems very in line with that retro aura and perhaps the best success is the management of the frame in that strange format, which is like a 4:3 but I think it is more of a 5:4, those pillar boxes give it a lot retro sense. Maybe I'm not so excited about the treatment of the typography, it seems to me that it needs to have a better hierarchy and perhaps the color can be something more basic or also more dynamic, although I think it looks good but it is the only thing that I think can still improve.
Good job finishing the course!
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Docent PlusVery good sequence. It has all the personality of science fiction intros that make a retrospective of somewhat random events but that in the end are a nod to a chain of events with a documentary spirit. The color management seems very in line with that retro aura and perhaps the best success is the management of the frame in that strange format, which is like a 4:3 but I think it is more of a 5:4, those pillar boxes give it a lot retro sense. Maybe I'm not so excited about the treatment of the typography, it seems to me that it needs to have a better hierarchy and perhaps the color can be something more basic or also more dynamic, although I think it looks good but it is the only thing that I think can still improve.
Good job finishing the course!
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Thank you so much!
I appreciate your feedback and I will pay more attention to the detail you mention.
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