I tell you: the concept is totally personal and yours, but I think that how to carry it out can be improved. First, does the horizontal structure make any conscious sense? I think that perhaps in vertical or square format what interests you will be more appreciated, or that you are looking for a structure that enhances the image more by trying several.
Also, regarding the light, I tell you that it is nice, but I think it is not very appropriate here. With the lighting that you have put in, what stands out the most is the part of the tobacco pack that is behind the baby. And this and the details of the box that interest the most remain in the background and lose importance.
I think if you thought about these things more, the image would improve a lot.
Hello Sivia, thank you for the comment and yes, all constructive criticism always comes in handy of course ... The format does not make any sense in thought ... and if it would be better in this case vertical format although I am not very in favor of that but There are photos that ask how this could be .... and the lighting could have given a little more to the baby that sleeps "inside the box as if it were a crib" but I wanted to give so much importance to the baby with the mask as the slogan of the box and in second plane the soul of the dead child ... but as you say you can always improve :) and we will work for that ... thanks for everything !!
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I tell you: the concept is totally personal and yours, but I think that how to carry it out can be improved. First, does the horizontal structure make any conscious sense? I think that perhaps in vertical or square format what interests you will be more appreciated, or that you are looking for a structure that enhances the image more by trying several.
Also, regarding the light, I tell you that it is nice, but I think it is not very appropriate here. With the lighting that you have put in, what stands out the most is the part of the tobacco pack that is behind the baby. And this and the details of the box that interest the most remain in the background and lose importance.
I think if you thought about these things more, the image would improve a lot.
I hope what I say helps you!
A greeting!
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Hello Sivia, thank you for the comment and yes, all constructive criticism always comes in handy of course ... The format does not make any sense in thought ... and if it would be better in this case vertical format although I am not very in favor of that but There are photos that ask how this could be .... and the lighting could have given a little more to the baby that sleeps "inside the box as if it were a crib" but I wanted to give so much importance to the baby with the mask as the slogan of the box and in second plane the soul of the dead child ... but as you say you can always improve :) and we will work for that ... thanks for everything !!
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