Hi Felipe, thank you very much for sharing, it's great!
In general, all the sounds you made and used are very good, they add a lot to the narrative. They are also very well synchronized, it may seem simple but it is actually very important. Sometimes a sound that is not "the best" can work perfectly if it is well synchronized, because it makes it believable. The mind, hearing something that is in sync with the image, almost automatically accepts it.
I'd love it if you could share some screenshots of your session, and tell us a bit about the process. It would also be very interesting to know what you recorded, and how, and what sounds you got from libraries.
In general it is very good, I write down some ideas that could contribute:
I really like the sound you made when he rubs his hands over his face. It sounds very good, and it has a "raspy" quality that makes us, as viewers, feel that the man has recently shaved. I also love the sound of the chair mechanism when it goes down the stairs, although when it brakes I would look for another sound for that "damaged motor". The one that's on right now sounds like some kind of gasoline engine, and it can be a bit confusing, because it sounds too different from the one that's been heard at the moment, so I'd look for something that's a little more similar, or that has a layer that's more like it. .
When the old man rubs his face and adjusts his glasses, he quickly lowers his hands to the bed. That sound of his hands on the bed could contribute there. The sound of his bones crunching is so much fun! Maybe it would just make it sound a little less "dry", and could be filtered a bit on high frequencies, so it feels less over the top, although sometimes over the top is very effective, depending on the genre. It would still be great to hear her footsteps, and since we don't see much of her bedroom floor, you could exaggerate the footsteps as if she were on a hollowed-out wooden floor. If you want to exaggerate a bit like for comedy or horror, for example, you could put some wood creaking in those steps.
Very good work! If you want to share a bounce with only the Foley that you have recorded, it would be very interesting for everyone.
Greetings!
ps: I had written a feedback a few weeks ago but something happened and apparently it was not sent...!
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Docent PlusHi Felipe, thank you very much for sharing, it's great!
In general, all the sounds you made and used are very good, they add a lot to the narrative. They are also very well synchronized, it may seem simple but it is actually very important. Sometimes a sound that is not "the best" can work perfectly if it is well synchronized, because it makes it believable. The mind, hearing something that is in sync with the image, almost automatically accepts it.
I'd love it if you could share some screenshots of your session, and tell us a bit about the process. It would also be very interesting to know what you recorded, and how, and what sounds you got from libraries.
In general it is very good, I write down some ideas that could contribute:
I really like the sound you made when he rubs his hands over his face. It sounds very good, and it has a "raspy" quality that makes us, as viewers, feel that the man has recently shaved. I also love the sound of the chair mechanism when it goes down the stairs, although when it brakes I would look for another sound for that "damaged motor". The one that's on right now sounds like some kind of gasoline engine, and it can be a bit confusing, because it sounds too different from the one that's been heard at the moment, so I'd look for something that's a little more similar, or that has a layer that's more like it. .
When the old man rubs his face and adjusts his glasses, he quickly lowers his hands to the bed. That sound of his hands on the bed could contribute there. The sound of his bones crunching is so much fun! Maybe it would just make it sound a little less "dry", and could be filtered a bit on high frequencies, so it feels less over the top, although sometimes over the top is very effective, depending on the genre. It would still be great to hear her footsteps, and since we don't see much of her bedroom floor, you could exaggerate the footsteps as if she were on a hollowed-out wooden floor. If you want to exaggerate a bit like for comedy or horror, for example, you could put some wood creaking in those steps.
Very good work! If you want to share a bounce with only the Foley that you have recorded, it would be very interesting for everyone.
Greetings!
ps: I had written a feedback a few weeks ago but something happened and apparently it was not sent...!
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