@martuoliver Hola Martina! I like the combination of the intimate and the philosophical, the domestic and the existential. Agatha Christie said that the best time to plan a book is when washing the dishes! My suggestion would be to return to the mate towards the end of the piece, as, in a way, the thoughts are happening while waiting for the mate to brew. Maybe describe what the mate tastes like and see if that leads to more thoughts. I'm ashamed to say I've never tasted mate. I think it's time :) Thanks for participating in the course and for sharing your writing with us. Un abrazo desde Madrid!
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Docent Plus@martuoliver Hola Martina! I like the combination of the intimate and the philosophical, the domestic and the existential. Agatha Christie said that the best time to plan a book is when washing the dishes! My suggestion would be to return to the mate towards the end of the piece, as, in a way, the thoughts are happening while waiting for the mate to brew. Maybe describe what the mate tastes like and see if that leads to more thoughts. I'm ashamed to say I've never tasted mate. I think it's time :) Thanks for participating in the course and for sharing your writing with us. Un abrazo desde Madrid!
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