+Nice use of the prop as the thread represents the problems your clients have. Brilliant!
+The content/You ideas are extremely clear. You followed the structure explained in the course perfectly.
++Consider experimenting with the tone & volume of your voice when you use dialogue in your story. You have a strong voice so playing with local variety could be interesting for you.
++Although your video is extremely clear and easy to understand, I would challenge you to add some pauses, for example when you introduce yourself and slow down in some areas, for example, say your name slower.
++I love how you get close to the camera when you introduce yourself. Consider getting closer/farther from the camera to see what happens. So many things to explore.
+Techincal set up, sound, and lighting are perfect. Nice use of the mic as the audio is crystal clear.
+Great opening and closing using the story. It is very engaging and relatable.
Congratulation, Dilma. This is an exemplary final project.
Keep on going, my friend. You will help so many people.
Please connect with me on IG or LinkedIn and make sure you send me a DM telling me who you are so we can keep in touch. Gracias!
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it's great!
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Thank you so much!🤗🤗 @lpooleyv
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PlusHi. You have done it very well. Congratulations...
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Docent PlusWow, excellent video, @dilma_liliana!
+Nice use of the prop as the thread represents the problems your clients have. Brilliant!
+The content/You ideas are extremely clear. You followed the structure explained in the course perfectly.
++Consider experimenting with the tone & volume of your voice when you use dialogue in your story. You have a strong voice so playing with local variety could be interesting for you.
++Although your video is extremely clear and easy to understand, I would challenge you to add some pauses, for example when you introduce yourself and slow down in some areas, for example, say your name slower.
++I love how you get close to the camera when you introduce yourself. Consider getting closer/farther from the camera to see what happens. So many things to explore.
+Techincal set up, sound, and lighting are perfect. Nice use of the mic as the audio is crystal clear.
+Great opening and closing using the story. It is very engaging and relatable.
Congratulation, Dilma. This is an exemplary final project.
Keep on going, my friend. You will help so many people.
Please connect with me on IG or LinkedIn and make sure you send me a DM telling me who you are so we can keep in touch. Gracias!
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Thank you very much @dandy1963
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Thank you very much @kyokotakeyama !
Noted all the suggestions you have given me. I will apply them in my next projects. Greetings 👋
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