Hello! Sorry for my delay in responding.
I think it's a good exercise to adapt a song to a comic.
You have developed quite a personal type of inking. I like it.
Perhaps, just to complain, I would tell you that sometimes you stick the characters too much to the edge of the panel (in the first panel, for example, it would have been nice to leave a bit of air between the feet of the central characters and the bottom edge. The type of lettering is probably not the right one either, I would try to choose another more elegant one.
In any case I think you've done a good job, keep going.
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Docent PlusHello! Sorry for my delay in responding.
I think it's a good exercise to adapt a song to a comic.
You have developed quite a personal type of inking. I like it.
Perhaps, just to complain, I would tell you that sometimes you stick the characters too much to the edge of the panel (in the first panel, for example, it would have been nice to leave a bit of air between the feet of the central characters and the bottom edge. The type of lettering is probably not the right one either, I would try to choose another more elegant one.
In any case I think you've done a good job, keep going.
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