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Singularidades
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Estas foram as fotos que decidi escolher para o projecto final. Fotografei durante esta semana entre Lagos (Algarve) e Évora (Alentejo).
Não houve qualquer conceito antes de sair para fotografar, apenas deambular pelas ruas e captar as situações e as personagens que fossem aparecendo tentando usar o ambiente ao redor a meu favor.
O set também foi escolhido com base no meu instinto e depois de algumas modificações ficaram apenas 11 fotografias.
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displayname1829004
Docent PlusHi Pedro! Thank you for submitting your project.
You have some very interesting images in it.
The second is great, for example. I really like the scene, the lady's smile and how you divide the frame.
But I wouldn't start with a skateboard photo. In it, I think the subject ends up overlapping the photographer. The scene is interesting, but you didn't add anything to what you saw, you just captured it well, with the boy being framed by the trees. There's nothing wrong with that, but personally I think we should go a little beyond the described fact to leave our signature on the photographs.
The third photo works well, the reflected hat stands out among the products in the window. In the fourth, I think the fact that the man is superimposed on the tree in the background hinders the reading. Other than that, it was an interesting combination of mannequins, architecture and character. The 6, by Spider-Man boy, also works well.
Overall, in all the other frames you demonstrate a good sense of framing and light, with good characters, creating interesting relationships between them and the urban setting.
I hope you keep taking pictures. The more you do, the more chance you have of encountering or observing even stronger scenes, which will help you build an impact essay about your region.
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displayname10329384
@gustavominas Thanks again for the feedback!
You're right about the skateboard photo doesn't fit the series I ended up deleting it.
The objective with this course was to go out more to photograph in my area, I always find everything boring around here, due to being a small town, there aren't so many people or so many events.
This course gave me a more positive perspective on routinely photographing in the same places and the truth is that the more I explore the streets of my city, the more I notice scenes that I didn't care about before.
I need to find a theme to connect everything, maybe with time I will be able to discover it.
Meanwhile, I leave you here my instagram (https://www.instagram.com/_na.rua_/) where I put the photos I'm taking.
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