Hi Sebastian! I see that you made several compositions using the elements of the illustration. I like that and it seems to me to be the general idea of the course, to get the most out of our drawings. Thank you very much for making it to the end of the course and for your commitment.
I see that you ignored me in lowering the opacity of the texture a bit in the main illustration. If you are going to print for real, lower it or it will be too dark. Otherwise I really like your illustration, the concept you put into it seems very interesting to me due to the current situation in our country. I love the characters, both the main and the secondary, they are very funny and original and also the implements of the character are very good.
As for the products, I like the variation you made on a black and white background to show the stickers, I want them all! And they also look well presented. The notebook looks great but it still looks very dark due to what I told you about the opacity. The buttons and mugs I like, although I would try versions with a white background so that the images stand out more, that is, without the edges of stickers. I would also like to see a button of the esmad skull character, it would be great!
No being more I congratulate you on your work, in general it is very well developed. Thank you for your evaluation and I hope that the course will help you to continue creating more projects of this type. All the best!!
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Docent PlusHi Sebastian! I see that you made several compositions using the elements of the illustration. I like that and it seems to me to be the general idea of the course, to get the most out of our drawings. Thank you very much for making it to the end of the course and for your commitment.
I see that you ignored me in lowering the opacity of the texture a bit in the main illustration. If you are going to print for real, lower it or it will be too dark. Otherwise I really like your illustration, the concept you put into it seems very interesting to me due to the current situation in our country. I love the characters, both the main and the secondary, they are very funny and original and also the implements of the character are very good.
As for the products, I like the variation you made on a black and white background to show the stickers, I want them all! And they also look well presented. The notebook looks great but it still looks very dark due to what I told you about the opacity. The buttons and mugs I like, although I would try versions with a white background so that the images stand out more, that is, without the edges of stickers. I would also like to see a button of the esmad skull character, it would be great!
No being more I congratulate you on your work, in general it is very well developed. Thank you for your evaluation and I hope that the course will help you to continue creating more projects of this type. All the best!!
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