Thanks for uploading your project! I really like it, very good work. The details of the hands say a lot about the subject, you have captured their expressions very well, the chiaroscuro is well managed, the plants that enter the shot out of focus contextualize it well and introduce the viewer into the scene ... To give you some advice, I would say that the second photo of the watch is repetitive, the first, with the book, captures it very well and is enough. The last photo is excellent, have you tried to brighten the face a little more in editing?
Thanks a lot!! Yes, I tried to illuminate the face a little more in the final edit of the last photo, but consider leaving it like that since putting a little more lighting on it looked a bit exaggerated considering the low entry of light it had in the scene, a amazing and interesting, really thanks for all the tips !! @lupedelavallina
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Thanks for uploading your project! I really like it, very good work. The details of the hands say a lot about the subject, you have captured their expressions very well, the chiaroscuro is well managed, the plants that enter the shot out of focus contextualize it well and introduce the viewer into the scene ... To give you some advice, I would say that the second photo of the watch is repetitive, the first, with the book, captures it very well and is enough. The last photo is excellent, have you tried to brighten the face a little more in editing?
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Very good Your photographic series counts and transmits a lot.
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Thanks a lot!! Yes, I tried to illuminate the face a little more in the final edit of the last photo, but consider leaving it like that since putting a little more lighting on it looked a bit exaggerated considering the low entry of light it had in the scene, a amazing and interesting, really thanks for all the tips !! @lupedelavallina
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