I love the project. I think you achieved the goal very well. It inspires strength and power of a queen (from the purest feminist aspect), but also pain and feeling, because it is a difficult and complicated fight. I feel like it transmits a lot.
Well, you know very well what I think of your project, I have been telling you every step you upload to the forum. It is, without a doubt, a MARVEL. I cannot agree more with the comments of the rest of the students.
Compositely and technically it's a 10, but your illustration goes a bit further. The emotion, the sensitivity and delicacy with which you have worked, and the brilliant way of representing a true queen bee is sublime.
To put a "but", perhaps you could try to blur certain parts of the drawing to break the outline of the illustration a bit, adding a watercolor stain that melts with the background, for example on the clothes or on the flowers of both the head like those at the bottom of the drawing. In this way, you would hide the feeling of "clipping" a bit and it would work even better as a watercolor, since the material itself almost always creates unexpected washes or accidents, and therein lies its richness. Anyway, it is to put you some problem, since in your case the feeling of "cut" is sooo little.
I ask you to keep drawing, always, because you are going to achieve everything you set your mind to, really.
A big hug, it's a pleasure to have you as a student!
Ricardilus.
@ricardilus thank you very much for your comments, they motivate me to keep working. I really liked the course very much and I am very excited about the possibilities that the technique offers me for my images.
I am going to take into account the question of the contours, I think that timidly it began to appear in the following works, (I will share them in the forum of the final result so that you can see them and so that you can verify, also how "hooked" I am with this way of doing it; so much so that I did not just keep the final project of the course but I continued creating others) At the moment I am in the process of a fourth work so there I will take into account the detail that you mention.
A big hug and for me it has also been a pleasure.
Cheers
Ariel
@pblancof thank you very much for your words. It is very exciting to know that my work mobilizes in this way. Thanks for taking the time to comment.
Cheers
Ariel
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Staff Plusawesome project
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@microbians thank you very much!
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@microbians very good !!! Great as you show the step by step !! To drawer favorites!
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I love the project. I think you achieved the goal very well. It inspires strength and power of a queen (from the purest feminist aspect), but also pain and feeling, because it is a difficult and complicated fight. I feel like it transmits a lot.
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Insegnante PlusHi @arielosti :)
Well, you know very well what I think of your project, I have been telling you every step you upload to the forum. It is, without a doubt, a MARVEL. I cannot agree more with the comments of the rest of the students.
Compositely and technically it's a 10, but your illustration goes a bit further. The emotion, the sensitivity and delicacy with which you have worked, and the brilliant way of representing a true queen bee is sublime.
To put a "but", perhaps you could try to blur certain parts of the drawing to break the outline of the illustration a bit, adding a watercolor stain that melts with the background, for example on the clothes or on the flowers of both the head like those at the bottom of the drawing. In this way, you would hide the feeling of "clipping" a bit and it would work even better as a watercolor, since the material itself almost always creates unexpected washes or accidents, and therein lies its richness. Anyway, it is to put you some problem, since in your case the feeling of "cut" is sooo little.
I ask you to keep drawing, always, because you are going to achieve everything you set your mind to, really.
A big hug, it's a pleasure to have you as a student!
Ricardilus.
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@ricardilus thank you very much for your comments, they motivate me to keep working. I really liked the course very much and I am very excited about the possibilities that the technique offers me for my images.
I am going to take into account the question of the contours, I think that timidly it began to appear in the following works, (I will share them in the forum of the final result so that you can see them and so that you can verify, also how "hooked" I am with this way of doing it; so much so that I did not just keep the final project of the course but I continued creating others) At the moment I am in the process of a fourth work so there I will take into account the detail that you mention.
A big hug and for me it has also been a pleasure.
Cheers
Ariel
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@pblancof thank you very much for your words. It is very exciting to know that my work mobilizes in this way. Thanks for taking the time to comment.
Cheers
Ariel
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My mother, what a project !!!
When I saw it the first time, I only saw the end, but I just go crazy with the process!
You are a crack! Congratulations!!!
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@kakeast thank you very much! I'm glad you like it. Greetings.
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