@sofiarr2398 Thank you very much. They give energy to praise to keep going! I will continue to publish it on my Instagram / labatesaccol. Greetings and thanks!
@blackbean Thank you very much for your comment! I will continue to publish it on my instagram / labatesaccol. I hope to make many strips of this character.
@soyelpacharo Hello Pacharo, thank you very much for your comment, I will continue with this character! I will post on my instagram / labatesaccol greetings !!!
Hi @luclabate
I loved the character, the expressiveness and the color. Excellent in those areas.
It seems to me that there are a couple of issues to take care of:
- In the first three strips, in my opinion, there are plenty of pictures. In all of them you can delete frames (or merge), without affecting the result. For example, in the second story, you have a second and a third squares that express more or less the same thing and that can be reduced to one. Much is said about the short story that nothing should be left over. As I understand it, the strips work in a similar way. That doesn't mean there can be cool and stylish exceptions.
- You have to take care of the written language as well as the visual one. Where do you put? Good morning Mr. Popó did you bring your resume? You should divide it into a greeting (Good morning Mr. Popó) and ask (did you bring your resume?) It should look like this: Good morning Mr. Popó, did you bring your resume?
In other tables commas or some signs are missing. Be careful with that.
I hope these comments are useful to you, I congratulate you for the excellent level, and thank you for sharing.
@sergiox Hi Sergio! Thank you very much for your comments and praise! Thanks for your time and your comments.
About the first point, it is something that I think a lot, sometimes I prioritize the space, the time of silence or an expression that sustains and then comes the auction. But it is true that it is a fine balance between whether something is too much or not.
On the second point, if it is true, I fully agree with what you tell me. What's more, I'm already modifying it in my next strip.
I invite you to follow me on instagramam / labatesaccol there I am publishing Popó and other drawings and works.
Greetings and thanks again!
Hello Nelblu thank you very much! In my instagram I continue with the strip.
I invite you to follow me on instagramam / labatesaccol there I am publishing Popó and other drawings and works.
Greetings and thanks again!
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I love.
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Great, keep going !!
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@sofiarr2398 Thank you very much. They give energy to praise to keep going! I will continue to publish it on my Instagram / labatesaccol. Greetings and thanks!
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@blackbean Thank you very much for your comment! I will continue to publish it on my instagram / labatesaccol. I hope to make many strips of this character.
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@luclabate already have a new follower! ;)
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Excellent strip! You are on a very good path! Don't let go.
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@blackbean there I saw you thank you very much !!
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@soyelpacharo Hello Pacharo, thank you very much for your comment, I will continue with this character! I will post on my instagram / labatesaccol greetings !!!
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Hi @luclabate
I loved the character, the expressiveness and the color. Excellent in those areas.
It seems to me that there are a couple of issues to take care of:
- In the first three strips, in my opinion, there are plenty of pictures. In all of them you can delete frames (or merge), without affecting the result. For example, in the second story, you have a second and a third squares that express more or less the same thing and that can be reduced to one. Much is said about the short story that nothing should be left over. As I understand it, the strips work in a similar way. That doesn't mean there can be cool and stylish exceptions.
- You have to take care of the written language as well as the visual one. Where do you put? Good morning Mr. Popó did you bring your resume? You should divide it into a greeting (Good morning Mr. Popó) and ask (did you bring your resume?) It should look like this: Good morning Mr. Popó, did you bring your resume?
In other tables commas or some signs are missing. Be careful with that.
I hope these comments are useful to you, I congratulate you for the excellent level, and thank you for sharing.
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@sergiox Hi Sergio! Thank you very much for your comments and praise! Thanks for your time and your comments.
About the first point, it is something that I think a lot, sometimes I prioritize the space, the time of silence or an expression that sustains and then comes the auction. But it is true that it is a fine balance between whether something is too much or not.
On the second point, if it is true, I fully agree with what you tell me. What's more, I'm already modifying it in my next strip.
I invite you to follow me on instagramam / labatesaccol there I am publishing Popó and other drawings and works.
Greetings and thanks again!
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Very good the strips, it is there! :)
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Hello Nelblu thank you very much! In my instagram I continue with the strip.
I invite you to follow me on instagramam / labatesaccol there I am publishing Popó and other drawings and works.
Greetings and thanks again!
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Very good! Applause for Poop!
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@rmzarate Thank you very much!!!
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