Congratulations. This is really gipping. Eva is an intriguing character and the concept has a strong hook. I'm intrigued to know what happens next, and I hope you are proud of it. It's a high concept with a character we want to know more about at the core.
Her ignoring the message shows she's not ready, and I look forward to seeing how she goes through the process as we learn more with her.
@mboutroswrites Thank you very much! Your opinion is very encouraging, I was afraid that in such a small fragment the idea I have in my head would be confused.
The course has been very useful for me to manage the story and also to match characters with concepts that I want to tell. Thanks to this, the pieces fit together, day by day, and the scenes emerge on their own. Some of the tips on how to mistreat the main character have been especially useful to me, hahaha. In a future course of yours, I would like to learn more Machiavellian tricks of this type.
As I have already told you, for me your course has been a gift. I will return again and again to what you teach us, especially when I feel that something is not right at some point in the story.
@ancabalaj I didn't find it confusing at all. It made me want to know more, which as an audience member is what keeps us engaged.
I'm glad the course has had such a positive impact on you, and thanks for how engaged you have been with it. I have some other exercises you completed to read and feedback on still, and will this weekend.
If I release another course I'll tell you, and you should join my mailing list on my website for future news as well.
Please do keep me updated with your work
@mboutroswrites Thank you so much! Yes, please let me know if you make a new course. In the meantime, I'm already subscribed to your mailing list and your book about characters is on my Kindle. I read slowly in English, but I'm looking forward to delving deeper into everything you tell us. I will try to find the balance between keeping you up to date and not monopolizing the entire course to myself.
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Insegnante PlusWell done for completing it! I will read it next week and give feedback. Hope you enjoyed it
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Insegnante PlusCongratulations. This is really gipping. Eva is an intriguing character and the concept has a strong hook. I'm intrigued to know what happens next, and I hope you are proud of it. It's a high concept with a character we want to know more about at the core.
Her ignoring the message shows she's not ready, and I look forward to seeing how she goes through the process as we learn more with her.
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@mboutroswrites Thank you very much! Your opinion is very encouraging, I was afraid that in such a small fragment the idea I have in my head would be confused.
The course has been very useful for me to manage the story and also to match characters with concepts that I want to tell. Thanks to this, the pieces fit together, day by day, and the scenes emerge on their own. Some of the tips on how to mistreat the main character have been especially useful to me, hahaha. In a future course of yours, I would like to learn more Machiavellian tricks of this type.
As I have already told you, for me your course has been a gift. I will return again and again to what you teach us, especially when I feel that something is not right at some point in the story.
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Insegnante Plus@ancabalaj I didn't find it confusing at all. It made me want to know more, which as an audience member is what keeps us engaged.
I'm glad the course has had such a positive impact on you, and thanks for how engaged you have been with it. I have some other exercises you completed to read and feedback on still, and will this weekend.
If I release another course I'll tell you, and you should join my mailing list on my website for future news as well.
Please do keep me updated with your work
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@mboutroswrites Thank you so much! Yes, please let me know if you make a new course. In the meantime, I'm already subscribed to your mailing list and your book about characters is on my Kindle. I read slowly in English, but I'm looking forward to delving deeper into everything you tell us. I will try to find the balance between keeping you up to date and not monopolizing the entire course to myself.
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