Hello Evelina
It seems to me that the hallway is well used as a common thread for different deaths. I also think that it has quite a symbolic load and that you manage to convey it with the images of the decadent and gloomy. I suggest that you cut a little the part where you explain the origins of the hospital and give more space to the final revelation, that is, the moment in which you tell us that this is not the first time it has happened.
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It seems to me that the hallway is well used as a common thread for different deaths. I also think that it has quite a symbolic load and that you manage to convey it with the images of the decadent and gloomy. I suggest that you cut a little the part where you explain the origins of the hospital and give more space to the final revelation, that is, the moment in which you tell us that this is not the first time it has happened.
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