Thank you for sharing your work with us and congratulations for these pages! As I told you in the forum, it seems to me a beautiful story. Do you want to continue it? I think this story could grow! I would like to know, for example, what are the books that the crocodile likes, what does he do at night when the library is closed, what is he feeding on, are you going to find out? How was your life at the zoo? Perhaps you can even remember and compare your old life with the library.
I really like the colors and the layout of the pages looks great. I am left wondering what the freehand text would look like, as I mentioned in the previous exercise. I understand that it is always easier and more comfortable to use computer font, but in my opinion, the result can be a bit cold.
I hope this story continues, congratulations again!
Thank you for the congratulations and hints. I really enjoyed the course and I'm already drawing a second story with a beetle and its own theater. A nice idea to continue the story with the crocodile. That's when I got the idea that the crocodile could eat the visitors' lunches, read stories to the bookworms at night and live in the zoo next to the elephant, who misses him and one day sticks his long trunk into the library in search of the crocodile ...
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Insegnante PlusThank you for sharing your work with us and congratulations for these pages! As I told you in the forum, it seems to me a beautiful story. Do you want to continue it? I think this story could grow! I would like to know, for example, what are the books that the crocodile likes, what does he do at night when the library is closed, what is he feeding on, are you going to find out? How was your life at the zoo? Perhaps you can even remember and compare your old life with the library.
I really like the colors and the layout of the pages looks great. I am left wondering what the freehand text would look like, as I mentioned in the previous exercise. I understand that it is always easier and more comfortable to use computer font, but in my opinion, the result can be a bit cold.
I hope this story continues, congratulations again!
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Thank you for the congratulations and hints. I really enjoyed the course and I'm already drawing a second story with a beetle and its own theater. A nice idea to continue the story with the crocodile. That's when I got the idea that the crocodile could eat the visitors' lunches, read stories to the bookworms at night and live in the zoo next to the elephant, who misses him and one day sticks his long trunk into the library in search of the crocodile ...
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@felicitate88 beautiful! did you use colored pencils?
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@thomassherlock yes and water soluble crayons
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