Hello Veronica
Thank you very much for sharing your project on the forum. I hope you have enjoyed the course and that it has helped you to discover new perspectives.
I think you've done a very interesting job. I think the synthesis is very good, and the cleanliness of the first two covers. The colors also work very well on both.
There is a visual coherence between these two covers that makes them seem like titles from the same collection; the colors and the way to solve the illustrations is similar.
Of the two "The waves" seems to me the most interesting, because thanks to the colors, the image does not only lead me to the idea of water. He also suggests fish. If that visual game were subtly more apparent, it would make a wonderful cover.
The last two have interesting things, but I think they don't work as well as the first ones:
The second version of "The waves" is very good, but without a doubt, I think the first one seems more resounding.
Regarding the last cover, I think it escapes a lot from the universe of the others. That would not be a problem if they were different projects, but in this case, having several proposals, it would be much more powerful if there was coherence between all of them.
One last detail that I wanted to tell you about is that on your covers, the text acquires a special role due to its size, composition and because your shapes are abstract. That makes text and image coexist very well.
Congratulations on your work!
@maguma thank you very much for taking your time to review and analyze the project. I have followed your suggestions and made "The Waves" with the idea of the fish, I have also tried that the eyes, apart from the eyes, could suggest bubbles. I loved the course! All the best.
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Insegnante PlusHello Veronica
Thank you very much for sharing your project on the forum. I hope you have enjoyed the course and that it has helped you to discover new perspectives.
I think you've done a very interesting job. I think the synthesis is very good, and the cleanliness of the first two covers. The colors also work very well on both.
There is a visual coherence between these two covers that makes them seem like titles from the same collection; the colors and the way to solve the illustrations is similar.
Of the two "The waves" seems to me the most interesting, because thanks to the colors, the image does not only lead me to the idea of water. He also suggests fish. If that visual game were subtly more apparent, it would make a wonderful cover.
The last two have interesting things, but I think they don't work as well as the first ones:
The second version of "The waves" is very good, but without a doubt, I think the first one seems more resounding.
Regarding the last cover, I think it escapes a lot from the universe of the others. That would not be a problem if they were different projects, but in this case, having several proposals, it would be much more powerful if there was coherence between all of them.
One last detail that I wanted to tell you about is that on your covers, the text acquires a special role due to its size, composition and because your shapes are abstract. That makes text and image coexist very well.
Congratulations on your work!
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Plus@maguma thank you very much for taking your time to review and analyze the project. I have followed your suggestions and made "The Waves" with the idea of the fish, I have also tried that the eyes, apart from the eyes, could suggest bubbles. I loved the course! All the best.
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