Very good, Eduardo. I'll put some points for reflection:
- I'd try a much shorter cut. She sometimes goes back to talking about her training (specialization) and it seemed a little repetitive.
- I missed more images of her daily life. Where does she study? Images of her meditating, doing some more everyday action (making tea, arranging books on the shelf). The images are always hers, without details or more closed plans (there are those of nature).
The editing, organization, proposal, soundtrack and finalization are great. Congratulations.
Thank you so much for sharing your project.
A hug.
Rafa
@rafajacinto
Thank you very much for your comments!
Yes you are right, at the time of editing I felt that lack of other daily shots that I could not do due to the nature of the place. I'm going to check if I can eventually record a few extra moments and edit it, although I think it's going to be a bit difficult.
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Insegnante PlusVery good, Eduardo. I'll put some points for reflection:
- I'd try a much shorter cut. She sometimes goes back to talking about her training (specialization) and it seemed a little repetitive.
- I missed more images of her daily life. Where does she study? Images of her meditating, doing some more everyday action (making tea, arranging books on the shelf). The images are always hers, without details or more closed plans (there are those of nature).
The editing, organization, proposal, soundtrack and finalization are great. Congratulations.
Thank you so much for sharing your project.
A hug.
Rafa
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Thank you very much for your comments!
Yes you are right, at the time of editing I felt that lack of other daily shots that I could not do due to the nature of the place. I'm going to check if I can eventually record a few extra moments and edit it, although I think it's going to be a bit difficult.
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