Hellooo!! Sorry that we only now see it, we are with a lot of work 🤑.
It is difficult to correct this project, because we do not understand the parts in Portuguese :(.
What we can say is that if the brand values are attitude, poetic and optimistic, perhaps the palette is not the one that best reflects that. In addition to the fact that the combination is not very particular, they are desaturated colors that move away from the living, from the movement. As for the logo, and thinking that the attitude is more likely to be seen in a hand-drawn line and that the same happens with the poetic. A gestural C is probably better, or a typeface made like that, or a stroke that you can make and scan.
We hope these opinions help you improve it!
Thanks for sharing your work 🖤
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Insegnante PlusHellooo!! Sorry that we only now see it, we are with a lot of work 🤑.
It is difficult to correct this project, because we do not understand the parts in Portuguese :(.
What we can say is that if the brand values are attitude, poetic and optimistic, perhaps the palette is not the one that best reflects that. In addition to the fact that the combination is not very particular, they are desaturated colors that move away from the living, from the movement. As for the logo, and thinking that the attitude is more likely to be seen in a hand-drawn line and that the same happens with the poetic. A gestural C is probably better, or a typeface made like that, or a stroke that you can make and scan.
We hope these opinions help you improve it!
Thanks for sharing your work 🖤
The Negra loves you
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