congratulations for uploading your final project and sharing it!
I recognize the flower that you painted in the second proposal, there is a tree right next to my house and they smell delicious.
I feel that the drawings could still be developed much more. Explore the textures of the leaves, how to make them go to the background but still propose a line on them? Also play with deciding what is behind your main element, or if you want it to remain blank, make us realize that it is a decision by default.
Explore more on the texture of wood, there are many possibilities in it!
As for the first proposal, your composition is still not very clear, it is difficult to decipher, but I think you would only have to give it a little more work to generate a greater difference in planes with lines that generate more gray.
Play with that hair texture, so that it is not all of the same tone; and if there is a face in the foreground, show us the light that could fall on it, that it does not remain just as a blank space. Without fear, try! keep exploring :)
Lucia, thank you so much for taking the time to write and critique my proposals. You are such a helpful instructor and I just appreciate your knowledge and the time and care you place in your feedback.
I will keep exploring and playing with these and other images. This has been a growing experience for me.
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Insegnante Pluscongratulations for uploading your final project and sharing it!
I recognize the flower that you painted in the second proposal, there is a tree right next to my house and they smell delicious.
I feel that the drawings could still be developed much more. Explore the textures of the leaves, how to make them go to the background but still propose a line on them? Also play with deciding what is behind your main element, or if you want it to remain blank, make us realize that it is a decision by default.
Explore more on the texture of wood, there are many possibilities in it!
As for the first proposal, your composition is still not very clear, it is difficult to decipher, but I think you would only have to give it a little more work to generate a greater difference in planes with lines that generate more gray.
Play with that hair texture, so that it is not all of the same tone; and if there is a face in the foreground, show us the light that could fall on it, that it does not remain just as a blank space. Without fear, try! keep exploring :)
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Lucia, thank you so much for taking the time to write and critique my proposals. You are such a helpful instructor and I just appreciate your knowledge and the time and care you place in your feedback.
I will keep exploring and playing with these and other images. This has been a growing experience for me.
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