I apologize in advance for not being 100% aware of this forum.
Here are my comments:
Wow!
The style of illustration and hierarchy has been great! I really like the lights and shadows that you have handled
The typographic style is very much in accordance with your concept, although you could improve it by using a complementary typeface or letterings that helps it have variety and is not repetitive. since this style has many traits and ligatures that can make your reading tired.
Details like "Music By" are what I mean.
Perhaps a simpler typeface or san serif that complements can help you or remove a little of the interlaced letters that are generated (example: the word ELECTRIC)
I really appreciate that you took the time to finish the exercise!
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Professeur PlusHello!
I apologize in advance for not being 100% aware of this forum.
Here are my comments:
Wow!
The style of illustration and hierarchy has been great! I really like the lights and shadows that you have handled
The typographic style is very much in accordance with your concept, although you could improve it by using a complementary typeface or letterings that helps it have variety and is not repetitive. since this style has many traits and ligatures that can make your reading tired.
Details like "Music By" are what I mean.
Perhaps a simpler typeface or san serif that complements can help you or remove a little of the interlaced letters that are generated (example: the word ELECTRIC)
I really appreciate that you took the time to finish the exercise!
Cheers!
R.
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@sindy_r3do Thank you very much! It's a great course! a greeting
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