The opening phrase is a success, as well as providing the key details of favorite toys. For your story to gain interest, I suggest you think about a conflict and develop it narratively. He points to procrastination as a barrier to his vocation. He also points to the complex situations that he has solved by following the drawing technique his father taught him. Either of these two points can be a source of narrative conflict. Remember that we pay attention to stories because we want to learn from the conflicts of others and their possible solutions.
Luck!
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displayname1133145
Profesor PlusThanks for your story, @damianuzho .
The opening phrase is a success, as well as providing the key details of favorite toys. For your story to gain interest, I suggest you think about a conflict and develop it narratively. He points to procrastination as a barrier to his vocation. He also points to the complex situations that he has solved by following the drawing technique his father taught him. Either of these two points can be a source of narrative conflict. Remember that we pay attention to stories because we want to learn from the conflicts of others and their possible solutions.
Luck!
displayname2444006
@antonionunezstorytelling Thank you very much, I will work on the suggestions. Excellent course, I learned too much.
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